Similes and metaphors
Year 5 have been exploring metaphors and similes. They have begun to write their own. Here are a few examples.
I am a tiger.
My teeth are swords
Ready to stab their nect victim
Sharp edged mirrors
Glistening in the burning sun's hands.
Santana.
I am a lion.
My paws are like giant's feet
Thumping against
The thick, hard ground
Joe.
I am a lion.
I am the king.
My mane is like a ring of fire,
A golden cloud around my neck.
I am a lion.
A clump of grass when hunting,
Very clever when doing so.
As if it were man's fierce wars.
I am a lion.
My paws are as soft as rubber,
As protective as steel,
Thundering against the rocks,
With no sense of pain.
I am a lion,
My tail is a furry whip
Rapidly colliding with my enemies,
As lethal as a chainsaw.
I am a lion.
My claws are knives
Slicing through diamond,
Aggravating is a fatal error.
Kieran